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Original Text: "Many people believe that climate change is the most pressing issue facing the world today. The overwhelming consensus among scientists is that human activity, particularly the burning of fossil fuels and deforestation, is largely responsible for recent changes in the Earth's climate. These changes are predicted to have far-reaching and devastating effects, including rising sea levels, extreme weather events, and disruptions to ecosystems and agriculture. In order to mitigate these effects, countries around the world have come together to negotiate international agreements aimed at reducing greenhouse gas emissions and limiting global temperature rise. However, progress has been slow and many argue that more urgent and coordinated action is needed to address this critical issue."

Revised Text: The most pressing issue facing the world today, according to many people, is believed to be climate change. Scientists overwhelmingly concur that recent changes in the Earth's climate are largely attributed to human activity, particularly the burning of fossil fuels and deforestation. The predicted far-reaching and devastating effects of these changes include rising sea levels, extreme weather events, and disruptions to ecosystems and agriculture. International agreements aimed at reducing greenhouse gas emissions and limiting global temperature rise have been negotiated by countries around the world to mitigate these effects. Despite this, progress has been slow and many argue that more urgent and coordinated action is needed to address this critical issue.

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